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We're back with the third entry in our weekly community project, where we post a render or animation created by a member of the Cgtuts+ community, and ask you to provide feedback and constructive criticism on their work. It’s a great way to learn more about the intricacies of computer graphics, express your viewpoint, and have your own content critiqued by your fellow artists!
Quick Ground Rules
- Be nice! We’ve deliberately chosen work that isn’t perfect, so please be constructive with any criticism.
- Feel free to offer any type of advice - Adil would particularly like critiques on the tracking, lighting and overall realism of his animation.
- You can also link to another video or render that you feel offers a great example of this type of content done exceptionally well.
So let's get to it, here's our second animation from Adil Mubarak open for critique!
There's A Chopper At My School!
A Little Background
This video was also made as part of my animating hobby. I steered a bit away from a full on animation video as with my 'Enzo vs C320' video posted earlier in a CGTuts+ workshop. As I am a student, I used Voodoo camera tracker as opposed to its more expensive competitors.
I would prefer if the critique was based on the tracking, lighting and overall realism. I would prefer if you responded using a voodoo context if you are commenting on the tracking.
Please let us know what you think in the comments – how would you have approached this project or done things differently? Any thoughts on how it could be improved or taken to the next level. Chime in below!
You can check out more of Adil's work on his Youtube channel: Adil Mubarak Productions
The most constructive and helpful comments will be featured on the site. Interested in submitting your own video or 3D render? You can do so here! and have your work featured in a future Cgtuts+ Workshop!